Live it

by tainted melody   Apr 8, 2012


We throw our life away,
attempting just to live it.
Calculating what we say,
trying not to blow it.

We analize the situation,
To avoid any blunders.
Giving speech filtration,
to avoid going under.

Overthinking what he said,
just to hear what you desire.
Looking for a common thread,
hanging by a wire.

If only we could just relax,
live life on a whim.
It would have amazing impact,
we'de go out on a limb.

Stop living by a blueprint,
break free from the norm.
Leave a lasting imprint,
take the world by storm.

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  • 12 years ago

    by William Mae

    A really good write, we can't live life by being a spectator. Very enjoyable to read.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Never take life for granted. Perfect job, great piece

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    This is really great :D it is similar to mine lol
    seriously we do need to stop overthinking it and learn how to enjoy life and not take it for granted :]

    great job! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    This was a great poem. I really liked it. Gave a powerful message to the reader. Just sometimes we need to let go. Not be so serious. That's what I got from the poem. Just a little sidepoint. You spelt analize wrong. It's analyze. But all in all a great job. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this! I like the concept of it and loved the lines stop living by a blueprint and break free from the norm leave a lasting imprint. That was a clever use of words! Very nice write here girl. ;)

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