It Hasn't Been That Long (advertisment)

Loved how you started it by saying it hasn't been long since you made me strong! Flawless

It hasn't been all that long
Since you made me so strong
Then made everything feel wrong

Then the ending becomes sad saying
Then you made everything feel so wrong! Amazing
Knowing the person you thought kept you from falling apart and making you strong, in the end making it feel so wrong

This was short but it was so clear on what you were trying to say

Great flow and beautifully penned!
Great poem5/5!

Ain't that how it goes, girl :/

It says alot with alittle and I like that aspect of it. To me, this just explains how we all really should be more careful, not to give our hearts away so quickly - that can end badly - as you described :(

Its summarizing a story that i'm sure many people can relate to.
overall very powerful, and meaningful.
Excellent

Short but nice poem...
Well written!

Short but detailed one=)keep writing and god bless you always",