Duende

"Like bishops to their
god, we worship her--
her incomparable beauty
and her laughter divine"

This is my favorite part..so lovely..so sweet. I have nothing to grasp any words to appreciate this..could I call it a precious poem? You're a very talented poet. This is wonderful!
5/5
~C

Beautiful and well written. I do like your
style 5/5

Like bishops to their
god, we worship her--
her incomparable beauty
and her laughter divine..

this was brilliant bro, this is really great. Your words are amazing, your placing them and how they just flowed was wonderful. Great work.

Beautiful and nicely written poem you have write here.

Like humans to their
planet, our lives are hers

^^ like this line and I like this poem , it is quite interesting. . . awesome poem.

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

I SO loved this one by you, Mat! So brief yet perfect! a very very meaningful piece of art, that made me fall in love with words again <3 jeeze I am inspired this morning more than enough! and now your poem....I guess I'm going to write an essay here -.-

You mastered the feelings and the flow was so smooth like a....well I don't know but I truly felt it perfect as no damn break distracted me not anything! rich and powerful!

Like bees to their
queen we flock to her--
her irresistible charms
and her duende comforting

^

I LOVE
the use of 'flock' here
and bees are the best metaphor, well-done!
but I guess you only needed one dash
after 'her' right? and although
irresistable is a cliche word
I loved the insertion of it!
so much passion....so much meaning.

Like bishops to their
god, we worship her--
her incomparable beauty
and her laughter divine

^^

I Love the repetitions.....like bees like bishops..
however wasn't a fan of repeating 'her'
egh it just looked..her beauty
her lips her nose....you know
I just thought it's too much
but oh
who knows???
maybe it was intentional!
then applauds for that!
I LOVE it when people describe our laughter
lmfao..

Like servants to their
king, we obey her--
her vegetarian ways
and her spirit humane
^
loved this part x100!

Like humans to their
planet, our lives are hers

^

The most wonderful ending ever by you!
jeezus!
I totally adored the poem
such a classic love poem
that is simple
and sweet and flowing so smoothly

<333