Dust of 21

Well, I think Noura said just about everything I was planning on saying so now I have to think everything over again. But I can definitely feel the love and unseen sadness etched into your lines. You write each word with a purpose and the meaning in each word holds a lot of emotion. I love the imagery you use and how you picture yourself in his arms and I think you did a wonderful job with the imagery. And yes, turning twenty-one your probably wondering where all those years have gone and also how it seems like yesterday you were just a little girl. Time fades away so fast.

All in all, I was well pleased with this poem and like always, you blow me away with your work and I can't wait to read more. Sorry it's been awhile since I could comment but life has had me busy. But in all sincerity I really think you did a great job at expressing your feelings and conveying a good message that I'm sure other can relate to all around the world. Great job and keep writing!!

Hahahahahaahhaahhahahaahhahaahhaahha
you are the joy of my life we7yet alah! LOL

This is an inexplicably perfect write... I am sure he would be proud of you now :D

And.. happy birthday again.

Hal marra mish zal8oota... bas DJ!

/o/ Put your hands in the air sometime,
saying eeee yoooo, baby let's goooo...
we're gonn' rock this world
like it's DYNAMITE!!

I wish i had nominating powers...

Sometimes small and few words describe our whole life. i seen its a short poem but i felt alot of meaning behind your words. im sorry for your loss. and want to hug you tight. stay happy