Life's Journey

by Thomas   Jun 5, 2012


Take my hand
And hold on
To this strand
Of luck and hope

For I want to
Go on life's journey
With no-one else
But you

I know
It will be tough
I know
Times get rough

But it's all
A part of the journey
And I will be there
If you fall

And never lose
Out of sight
That without darkness
There is no light

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  • 11 years ago

    by neon sunset

    It's very tender and emotional. it's a beautiful piece of water color paints in my mind.
    ^.^ plz comment on some of mine.

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I love the rhymes, keep up the good work.

    It's hard to leave a longer comment, because I feel like everything is clearly express in the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Really simple, but I love your style, your poem was really good, and it flowed really well:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Just reading this brings a smile to the face. From
    start to finish there was a smooth flow and each stanza has a warm touch of friendship to it..enjoyed it :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Beautiful and so sweet! it has a really nice flow. 5/5

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