Rain-kissed Daisies (Tanka)

by Meme   Jun 15, 2012


Rain down softly on
a field of blooming daisies,
then pick me the ones
that were mostly showered with
your kisses .. and I will wait.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh hun this is so beautiful!!!

    I love it, I love the image of rain showering over such beautiful flowers and picking the ones that were kissed mostly, oh you have a way with words.

    Beautiful

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Meme this is such a beautiful tanka!!! I love itttt!!! Every word and the whole thing was just a breath of fresh air!!

    Tankas are your thing now ;) keep them up! You paint a lovely picture in few words <333

    Amazing poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This made me smile, I loved it so much. It was dear and sincere and written straight from the beauty of your heart. Brilliant ending, that promise to wait.

    Great job :]

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Beautifully written...from start to end its really good.. so short but meaningful. goof work

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    WHOOOOOO!! Meme!! i adore this tanka!!!

    Grea subject.....thinking about that rain eh?

    just beautiful x

    • 13 years ago

      by Meme

      Yeaaaah!! Was totally thinking about that rain :)

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