World Without Air

This is just beautiful.... I like the tone here and the words used to describe this piece... I just love the way how u effortlessly write stuffs so beautiful:)
Awesome as always

You were just coming out of writers block when you wrote this? Girl, are you sure you even had it? This is really, really good. The last stanza sums up the whole piece. It says exactly what you mean and it gives it a bit of a bite. Oh how I ve missed you x

Oh my how i loved this write!!!!!, the last stanza was my favourite but i looooooved it all :-)

It had a really nice pace fort the reader and i thought that the emotions were portrayed effortlessly.

Seriously great job!!!!!

"Just a million pieces
Beyond repair
A dance with the devil
In a world without air"

The last stanza makes the whole poem. You felt like you have lost the battle and there are no ways of repairing the feelings/love you once had, so you are dealing with it even though you feel like you are being suffocated through the whole process.

Great write!

I need someone
Anyone will do
But it all comes back to this
To me and you..

Sad bt Beautiful, and jenna frm no whr it luks like it hs cum frm writers block..