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by Omar Jul 2, 2012
Love, romance /
I love you so much,
can't you see,
that you belong with me.
Even though I do things that hurt,
I try and try
to make everything right,
but I always end up making you cry.
I'm trying my hardest to prove to you
that I am here and I love you,
but i just want to see you smile.
So if i make you unhappy then I will resist
the sight of you gives me bliss.
the movement when our eyes meet,
but you look away with blue eyes so sweet.
I didn't relize i hurt you until now,
I wish I could change the past somehow,
I know i'm not perfect, not even close,
but i hope you expect the apology i owe.(Thank for reading. And if your going to comment here then you should also common on reyna. She helped out to. Oh if any one of yall want to write a poem with me, you're welcome to do so.)
by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA
A beautiful write.
It flowed and rhymed really well.
In the last stanza:
'relize' should be 'realize'
Also, 'i' should be 'I'
Fantastic job. 5/5
**I will post this in the other author's profile too.
^^ I cannot find the 'Reyna' you speak of - perhaps a direct link? OR add that you have collaborated with this person in the box provided when you sumbit/edit poems?
by X Harlea X
Good job Omar. 4/5
by Owner of an Untamed Heart
This was so beautiful. 5/5 great job.
by Hannah Lizette
This shows that you are willing to do anything for her, even make yourself unhappy just to make her happy... great job.
Keep writing! :)
Your poems are very heart felt and beautiful keep writing.