Aloe Tears

by Maple Tree & Decayed   Jul 4, 2012


Shades of mint devour
a senseless soul,
heal my grief stricken heart
for the sun has failed to shine
today, and I...

I kissed the hands of time
to pluck my petals,
enshroud them in mist
not dust, for my stem
is nurtured by dreary,
not chivalry.

Pale dew drops
fail to hydrate a
lonesome soul
trapped in darkness,
our roots grow
restless,

and we grow timeless.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Karla

    /........./
    (= ; . ; =)Amazing piece guys.Bravo!
    (")___(")

  • 13 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Aaaaaaah sorry for being late, I thought the comment will be copied here as well..

    AMAZING PIECE you too, love it:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Oh my, just amazingly sad and wonderful all wrapped up in one, this is epic you two have made me swear of late your writes have been soooo good..............doesnt look like thats gonna change any time soon WTF! Lol

    Almost made it :-)

    Great great collab guys i love it :-)

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    :O How beautiful but sad is this write!!!

    Firstly the title made me think of the tissues that have Aloe on them that when you're sick or crying a lot, that you don't hurt yourself because the tissues are too rough.

    I adored this write, the beauty between you two fit wonderfully.

    Awesome collab!!!

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    I am so happy that this is our first collab :)

    It was an honor!

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