Reject

Andrea, this is no doubt one of my favorite poems by you. This is just how I'm feeling right now.

"I'll never fit in, // nor do I want to,"

This is simple, but brilliant! I love how it's worded. I've felt this a lot of times; I'm not so sure whether I like it or not, but I think I've gotten used to it though it's not the best feeling ever.

"but odd has a price
to pay,
and I'm lonely."

The ending felt, to me, like you just wrote what I've been wanting to, but couldn't/don't know how to. It's just amazing/weird/wonderful how I can relate so much to this piece. Never stop writing.

This is a true statement. We all have delt
with some kind of rejection in life.
Instead of accepting who we truly are
people becoming so consumed with trying
to be popular and fitting in. Is it really that
important? That means we are giving up
our own identity just to please others.
excellent write

Short but powerful work. I liked it. I loved the ending it emphasised the power of the poem for me.

As for fitting in, people who fit in may not seem lonely - but they are inside, as the people who they are fitting in with wont be in their lives for long, those kind of people never are.

good poem.

It is really unfair and heart aching to be rejected by humans. This notion is quite expressed brilliantly in the last stanza.

But as you are there for me, I am there for you.. We all are here, Andrea :)

You're not lonely, we're all here for yo, love you