Certainity

Yaki,

This was strange for me to read. You know about all about my brother and the situation my family was in, difficult times come and people aren't sure how to handle them but I can tell you one thing, true love is unconditional, as is a mothers. She said she wouldn't because she didn't raise you to be one, well that's just her way of scaring you, trying to make you realize it isn't the write path to go down. Through everything my brother did our family has still loved him and he was in the same situation you mentioned here, trust me mothers say a lot but it's their way of protecting you.

I love the strength your mother has and while you two may not always see eye to eye you can't deny she's been a part of your life for all these years and is still trying to teach you a life lesson.

The only constructive criticism I can give is to tell you to correctly space your punctuation, that's about it. I like this piece because it's truth, its honesty. It's something raw brought from real life to a poetic sense for others to read and also be given that life lesson.

Nice job, sweets
Mel

Oh my gosh. I love this.

Sounds like something id "like" on facebook, but the fact that it came from you makes it 1000 times better...

This really does hold so much truth from a mother who fought damn hard to raise her child right.

Beautiful <3

Love this, it was truly beautiful, not much else to say but your brevity is precious and this moment is strong too, especially incorporating your mother's answer also that you are not meant to be this.

Emotional and sad but very gud poem..5/5

I couldn't have the marks that qualify me to study medicine (and I hate medicine anyway) and my father is hating me. :) So no worries, I can feel ya.

Certainity = Certainty. Without the 'i'? o.o