Token For You

Andrea, I have no idea why I never saw this, I must have my eyes shut all the time, seems I am missing some great poetry...

Anyway, You always touch me with your writes, to the point that I find myself lost in a world, I can always feel the emotion and here I feel the love and the pain to do what's right.

Sometimes those close to us, bare the brunt of our bad moods, our anger and we are so open and gentle to those we maybe aren't as close to...it is something that happens to all of us.

I love your words, always...like I said, touching piece.

x

Very touching piece Maple, it is a bit of a mixture between all the categorys really. Sad, happy, love, inspiring.

This bond described is so rare and special, one which is desired by a lot fo people in many relationships. nicely written. xx

I really I'm quite stuck for words here but...as usual..I'll try..

I'm writing this display
of visual artifacts
as a token of my
love for you.

I walk with you,
between sunsets
and a new dawns
grace.

^^^

Sleep is disturbed but...you don't mind?

Between your
nightmares and dreams,
this is what I feel,
I am with you,
maybe that's why
your afraid to tell me? * you're*

Afraid to tell you what? Something you don't want to know but...really you do?

It's ok free bird,
I know, and
I'm honored to
be the whisper
that soothes
your agony,

^^^

To me this is the most important part of the poem...there are unspoken words that neither of you can say yet... you both acknowledge them..

I'll never stop, even after death
I'll be there for you always. 'll try...*I'll*

Hate correcting such a personal piece but I know you wouldn't like it if I didn't?

Before I read the beautiful comments above me, I though that this was really about a bird.. maybe caged... or wounded... and I truly was fond of the idea; I so much liked how this ended.

But if the meaning is about friendship, then it's still okay with me :P ... such a lovely write!

This came across my attention in the right time. I actually understood this poem, like no other by you.
My friend got angry at me from a short while, like 2 hours lol, because we are so close that I don't open up regarding certain things.

It's easier to open up for people who are not close, like it is also very easy to talk freely for someone who you have just met on taking it all out infront of someone who is close. At times, it's the opppposite, but for ME, I am like this friend of yours!

The bond between you is something so beautiful! I love how you show that you are with that friend through good and bad, throuh bitter and sweet and you imply it by sayingg:

nightmares vs dreams
sunsets and dawns.

also it implies time...like past and future moments. showing indeeeeed an VISUAL artifacts of your love !!

the poem is very strong, and flowing and heartfelt. I love the meaning behind it, something I can relate to.

you are an amazing friend, who is loved by many. just like me he he :P (A)

5/5 keep writing !