Son of My Right Hand (Senryu)

Whoa. I'm speechless. Your last line.

Syrup your awesome xx the title iw enough to make me blub today xxx

Such sad words from you Maple, but you expressed them well as always xx hugs

Woo hoo, great imagery

It is amazing how much you can say with so few words.

Do the feathers being broken relate to a loss of freedom?

I love all formed poetry, It is great to restrict yourself to a type so that you have to cram powerful words and metaphors in.

awesome