Vulture's Prey

Very original. Not the usual lost love/relationship poem. I love the whole idea of the vulture. Vultures don't feed on strong, healthy "prey". They wait til its weak, helpless, hopeless.. or until someone else does the hard work of killing it. In this case, I imagine the prey was already weak and he waited for his perfect moment to feast on it. Interesting write.

-Liz

This is a very unusual love poem and really quite deep

Well written

This poem is extremely atmospheric, the imagery is very powerful, and paints a vivid picture for the reader. This has made me want to read more of your work! I loved "disrupting simultaneous symphonies of hearts" and the dramatic ending. I wondered if the first line shouldn't be Glassy eyes have caused soaked pillows? Although I can see that it could work both ways. A couple of typos simultanoues should be simultaneous and simphonys should be symphonies, this is nothing that cannot be solved with a little editing. All in all I really enjoyed the emotion and imagery in this piece.

Very interesting piece that's for sure. I see power behind it, how you used the vulture in the tense that you did. It was very unique. I can picture it all in my head very well. 5/5 and added to my faves.

I very much like the start line of this poem, creative and intriguing the reader straight away.....that the pillow is soaked with your tears and your eyes are watery nice use of interpretation.

Your implying in the poem that the vulture is the person who hurt you and been betrayed by and he would demise each relationship he would be in, thus he would move onto the next person or relationship and prey upon that individual as he did to you. This is not very good, to hurt someone who cares for you and destroying everything, I think this person has commitment issues.

Great write!