Knackered...(String Reverse Haynaku)

by ah satan 666   Dec 1, 2012


Today has been
long, and
unsatisfying...

No appreciation for
bleeding, skinless
feet...

Muscles ache, bones
ground to
dust...

My keys jingle,
the last
lock...

Homeward bound, is
the direction
faced...

Thank fcuk today
is over...
Goodnight.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I think you should plaster this on everyone's front door after a long day of work and they come home to this on their front door, i think they would agree!

    Nice work x x

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Hmm...so u had a busy tiring day huh..
    Nicely written,
    Appreciated !

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh dear mercy momma of trees! I've had days like this... you penned it well... Love this..!!! Very unique and just filled with exhaustion :p

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I guess you had a hard day;)

    Great job, enjoyed reading it^_^

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I am glad you changed the category and found a way around the f word.
    You wrote such a gutsy piece with so much oomf...
    Totally love it!

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