My Sun

by Robert   Dec 12, 2012


The pain I feel burn's my bones
To ashes my soul shall become
My heart shall change to solid stone
As I break to the heat of the sun

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  • 11 years ago

    by yogi73

    I agree with the other reviews. wonderful word choice and your unique voice lends it self well to poetry.

  • 11 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A sad write, SO intense... and full of feeling! I loved it :)
    Really Well Done :)
    ~ Olwin

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Short yet they hold a depth full of emotions. Liked the rhyme and flow..good one!