Some people remain unchangeable [Tanka]

by Khalid M Darwish   Jan 27, 2013


Despite all sweet rain -
that the sky pours to the sea
it remains salty
Don't bother yourself with those
who wouldn't change when advised

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  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Despite all sweet rain -
    that the sky pours to the sea
    it remains salty..

    khalid..bro, jus brilliant..subhaan allah..

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Interesting message

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    But do advice then if they don't change, it's not our fault at least we tried and our conscience can be clean. I also agree with this piece.