Money vs Morals [Tanka]

I agree. When the love of money becomes a top priority in your life, then it's time to examine it. I think the word "do" should be "does," if I'm not mistaken, but other than that, this is very lovely. :)

I am again overwhelmed by the wisdom in your poetry

Now that is a very true and excellent point. completely agree Khalid!

Oh heck yes i agree with this poem!!!! i'd rather have morals (and i do to a certain extent...sadly) than money since for me money can make a blessed man that was born with everything a human being SHOULD be and make him a loathsome creature that devours the innocence of others trust me i agree with this poem a 100% it's a really good poem it show the truth that ANYONE with a brain would agree to! :) Khalid!

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