This is beautiful , the simplicity in this piece
Pushs raw emotions through the words and into hearts
I loved how you kept it all based on the ocean ,
This is a prime example of how simple Poerty works
Well done indeed
9 years ago
You already know how I feel about your poetry William..No one does a rhymer like you. I love the story this told and feel as if I was watching the whole poem take place. It flowed along beautifully. And this is my fav stanza, if found it incredibly sad.
I desire to sit beside her,
To try my key at her hearts door,
But I just keep my distance,
While she sits beside the shore.