First breath (Haiku)
by Mohan Mar 13, 2013
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The first drop of tear |
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10 years ago
by WintersAngel
This is really sweet :)
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11 years ago
by Rusheena
This is beautiful, Mohan. It's nice to see the word "tear" be used in good context for a change. That truly is one of the most beautiful moments in life.
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11 years ago
Great haiku! I like the nice simile between new-born human and drop of tear resembling the dew. Excellent!
