by PETER EDWARDS Mar 25, 2013
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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He's driving to work, it's pouring with rain |
by Dreamofolwin
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Very heartouching write Peter.... Loved the opening lines (they captured me straight away...) |
by Vic Johns
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Interesting ! |
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My fav line was the one that said " His spirit now broken, trust all now but died. Bitterness growing where love did reside." That was one of those lines that makes a poem something memorable! |
by cati
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Loved it!! |
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Nicely Done Peter |