Cutie Little Sobber

by Kips2.0   Mar 26, 2013


~~~Guys, because she hopelessly fall for you shouldn't make you treat her so poorly. Girls, don't sell yourself cheap. You are so very precious!~~~

"Twist and turn, and twist and turn"
Was the phrase that repeatedly
Flooded my thoughts,
When I saw you do what you do,
Sobbing with a tattered heart.

Once again you've been tricked
By another guy who beguiled you,
Guys are not magicians, yet
You just ever so often fall for them
Like you've been enchanted.

Get up my cutie little sobber,
Fooled by his wealth and fame, I knew
His ego was detrimental to your beauty.
No understanding, trust, care or love,
Without which no bond can stand.

So he had your heart and tore it apart
And all you do is twist and turn
Upon your bed, amidst your tears.
Get up now, cutie little sobber
And face your fears, cutie pie.

You made the wrong assumption
By thinking you needed attention;
Lo, what you need is self-respect,
And until you get that straight,
Darling, you can do without a guy.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nice Work Kips!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rebecca Bentley

    Wonderful, it's a nice change to find a guy that has a girls feelings at heart. Nicely written, I like it :)

  • 11 years ago

    by mandy

    Very unique, makes me think of so many people I know haha. 5/5

    mandy

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Kips, this is fabulous! I've never read a poem by guy who feels for a girl. I wish I see more guys who are like you. Shedding away that worthless ego and giving his girl the attention and love she needs!
    Way too awesome!!!:)
    Keep writing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Liz

    This is such a sweet one! Girls, and guys alike, have probably needed to hear these uplifting words sometime in their life. Very sincere, inspirational poem. Going in my faves, in case I need to read it one of these days. :P