Children's Tale

It's funny that Myryn thought this was funny because I took it very sad.. lol. I looked really far in to it I suppose :P

Instead of the actual mustache/"mowing the mess" etc seemed more like her wanting to change what she felt was character flaw...

and then to go into it saying she could make the changes, but they are obviously hard, and it makes her vulnerable.. is it something she REALLY wants to do or will she learn to live with it? Will it hurt, or will it only hurt for a little bit and then heal?

See.. I looked too far into it lol.

I can't really express my thoughts on this one, just that it was really whimsical and reminds me of Tim Burton. I honestly liked it a lot :) now i know you can write almost any type of poem, stop making me feel astounded by your amazing talent already!

Not only a tongue twister but a humorous one, too. Thanks for helping me taking control of my speech organs :P