Wait

by Lemon   Apr 28, 2013


You wait
Bated breath, your stomach
Ties itself into knots
No, take that back, you don't have any breath.

Anticipation as you- Did I remember this?
As you- I hope I didn't forget that

And the seconds tick on and become minutes
And the minutes are hours
Long hours
Days
Waiting on a fragment when you'd know...

Then you hear the door go and your heart
Jumps, you're feeling flustered, you
Rush...

But it's only your mum coming home with the shopping and your head's filled with doubts and your stomach with butterflies and your thoughts are as jumbled as these words flowing from my fingertips as I

Wait

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  • 10 years ago

    by Angie

    Sorry double post, damn computer... or damn PnQ

  • 10 years ago

    by Angie

    WOW... waiting... never would've thought to write about that subject, but I think you hit the nail on the head with this one... I couldn't have described it any better... this is perfect, waiting with bated breath, the knots and butterflies, that jumpy feeling you get with every little sound... so many people can relate to this write because I think we've all felt this way... very creative, well done!!