Our summer

by The Poet Behind The Poems   May 23, 2013


Everyday is summer time, even the breeze can't cool down the passion we create.Your smile is all I need my darling, it feeds me; consolidating my hunger for anything else that tempts me. I would bathe in your eyes;Atlantic oceans will never be as deep as the beauty you posses beneath your perfect exterior.The sun will always shine my darling even when our summer, is long gone.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow T, this is one of your best poems. It flows quite flawless and I enjoyed reading it at such an easy flow and pace.

    I do think you should lay it out differently though as it doesn't look as appealing as you normally lay your poems out, but I think it deserves a nice shape to it because it is a beautiful poem.

    Very lovey dovey wovey. Why is it not in the love category???

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    Atlantic oceans will never be as deep as the the beauty

    ^^ I think there is a typo, double "the"...
    unless it was intended.

    I like this poem, it reminded me of,
    well I like using the Atlantic ocean lol
    and the contrast of cold and warm in the poem was used too well.

  • 6 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Oh my stars, Tony! This is so romantic! I feel all mushy now, lol. It's so full of life and energy, and imagery just blows my mind! Such a lifetime of words said in such a short poem, well done! I haven't nominated a poem in a while, but this one definitely gets my vote. Favorited as well. Great job, Tony :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very romantic... very passionate. Wonderful poem.

  • 6 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    This is such a beautiful poem, the thought of someone eyes being so beautiful and deep that you can see yourself in them, just beautiful. When you truly care about someone, there is always a fire raging inside of you while you're with them, I totally can relate.

    Lovely....AL

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