Lasting love [ Blackout Poetry ]

For being short and simple you created a great image and full emotional impact. That's definitely a great skill, and you've shown that skill remarkably well. Excellent piece

In just five lines you have given a very true
statement of love and so very meaningful..very very nicely written!!

Great things come in small packages

This is awesome

This is beautiful -- simple, yet serene. It feels uplifting and quiet, peaceful. It's not a poem that screams out too much -- distracting the true message. Simply beautiful!

This is an intriguing style and one I haven't come across before. I followed the link but it didn't give me any information on this form. I'd love if you'd pm me with some info on it. Short yes, enjoyable YES!!!