Child (monologue)

by Alanis   Sep 28, 2013


"Take me on a journey!" She cried. "What ails you my dear?" Questioned the friendly face. "Ignorance," She replied smoothly "Why you are only a child, nothing should concern you but the shoes on your fragile feet and the threads that cover your pale skin," "Yet, my existence is based upon the same values and purpose as yours," "What might that be?" "Wisdom, faith and hope," "My dear child, do not speak such rubbish, your mother would surely put you to bed if she heard!"
Silence interlude the room, the child was staring at her with the eyes of a much older complexity.
"Wisdom to be wise, faith to be faithful and hope to be hopeful," The maiden was shocked, how was this little girl to know such things? Surely she was possessed. "Where would you like to journey to child?" "The stars to inspect eternity, or perhaps the caves of preeminent mountains that dock on the other side of bay, maybe set sail and discover new terrain!" "Have you fever my dear?" The maiden replied terrified, inspecting the girl's porcelain face.
"Does the sky question the clouds that cross it or the stars that consume it?"
"No, it merely accepts its fate" "I think you are finally comprehending my words,"
The small girl replied with a grin. "You confuse me child, I struggle to keep up with you," "You lack imagination and independence," "You lack common sense," The maiden replied rudely. "Common sense is useless without its owner's personal interpretation, this is mine," Replied the girl smugly.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    The dialogue is well done. It takes a while but I come to believe the child is truly as wise as she sounds. Certainly you would not expect such words from one so young.
    I might suggest that the format may be easier to read if you break the dialogue into a playwright style: starting each statement with a new line, then you would also start scene statements in new lines.
    Well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lemon

    A very interesting writing style! I love finding new types of poetry :). My only criticism is that I don't think this is a monologue- surely it's a dialogue because there are two people speaking? Forgive me if I'm wrong :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Amy

    Really amazing! Such a wonderful way you've written it. By far my favourite! 10/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is a very cute and interesting poem from you haha. I adore monolouges as well so that totally drew my attention. I love how you talk about a lil girl here. I love that she seems to be smarter than she appears. Nothing should concern a child at all but this child is very witty and has a stubborn heart haha. I think we all want to be free and smarter and no one truly knows what we are doing here in life. That is what we have to find out. I like how there seems to be a narrator here or a angel or something or someone watching this girl. We all have our own opinion and believe what we want to learn. I think this girl could be you as well or you when you were little. We question a lot of things in life too so I think we can connect to this character. Imagination cones from a childs like wonder and this girl has a good one. I loved this poem though as it shows how smart lil girl or lil kids can be. Very interesting haha. I loved it. Xx 5