by Maher Feb 12, 2014
category :
Life, society /
other
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Where snowflakes fall and fluid flows chilled, |
by Aiko Hiraeth
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I LOVE long detailed poems like this. What it presents itself to my mind as is a "review", basically, in poem form, of the world itself. How the humans have made the world, the monster the world has made itself, yet a changing one that tries so hard to become better. It has so much pictures within the words. |
by Maher
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! :) |
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WOW. Beautifully written. Excellent use of feelings and raw emotions. And I agree, sometimes the best things just flow out without even trying. |
by Maher
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work - very much appreciated :) |
by Angel Tears
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Wow.. This was just beautiful. There's nothing else I can think to say! |
by Maher
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That is more than enough, thank you! :) |
by BlueJay
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This piece is well worth its win. The style is wonderful and the word choice worked very well in this piece. Absolutely love this write :) |
by Maher
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Thank you, I really appreciate that :) |
by Maple Tree
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Elegance is the first word that describes this piece, true Elegance! |
by Maher
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Thank you kindly! Unlike some of my others, this one just flowed right out. The ones that come from the heart, are based on actual happenings or truths and hold a close connection with what I and others experience from day to day, are often the ones that have the most impact on others. I don't mean to sound conceited or anything, but it's true for a lot of writers on here and I'm sure they will attest to it too :) |