by Everlasting Mar 17, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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It's fine |
by Meena Krish
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Looks like you have written a loop poetry making each one unravel like a yarn, unravelling your thoughts...good job! |
by LittleMsPink
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Well written c: |
by Jyoti Rawat
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Excellent work , |
by earlgreytea
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Any time. :) |
by earlgreytea
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I love the structure and wording in this poem, the thoughts all seem to melt together, all connected, interlocked. It was an amazing read, there isn't alot of poetry that really stands out, but yours does. Loved it!!! :) |
by Everlasting
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Thank you so much!! |