The Fly and I (Double Etheree)

This was fun! I like reading stories. This one flowed smoothly. I like the journey, I was taken. Plus it has this cheerful and constant tone. It kept me entertain from start to finish. I also like tht you started with I and that you ended with I too.

At first read I thought it could have been a palindrome etheree. However, after reading I realized it wasn't. But I was not disappointed. I enjoyed reading the story.

So merrily sweet

I have never ever been able to write a double etheree so when I read one I am overjoyed. Maple this makes my imagination run wild and as a creative and image writer I love this to death. The rhymes are a nice touch as well. You don't see that often in an etheree. Anyways the use of nature is wonderful. The first thing I thought of when I read this was a fairytale like alice inwonderland. The characters are so unique ib their own way and each one you have given their own personality and brought them to life . Here I can imagine the main character going on an adventure andalong the way with each small stop making a new ffriend. And by the end their are richer from the endeavours they have experienced. Anyways this proves you can do anything when you let your imagination run wild :D. Beautiful!