Streets of Hull

by NightFlyer   Apr 12, 2014


Rivers flow down towards the bay
And with them, lifetimes swept away
Of cobble stones and windswept sand
And legends of our native land
I walk alone down avenues
Of shifting sands and ocean hues
And faces from another time
From road to sandy bluffs, I climb
Down by the sea, the windy shore
Whispers their names, who are no more
Pale ghosts who wander by the sea
Up from the waves, they call to me
Of whalers, who for glory, yearned
And sailing ships that ne'er returned
Of sailors brave and lovely maids
To them, the ocean serenades
I sip my beer and hear a gull
Lost on these timeless streets of Hull.

by Night Flyer (c) 2014
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note:
Was looking through one of my notebooks and saw a poem that I had started last year after visiting Nantasket Beach in Hull, MA. After reading what I had, I thought it would be more effective as a rhymed poem. This is the result...

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is really smooth. The rhythm, rhyme and imagery are perfect though I felt it was cut short as it was really written well

    All the best, Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Whatever you pen makes me wish to read more. I like the smoothness and the uninterrupted flow from start to end. Very nice!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Wow, nice imagery. Very wonderful read. Thanks for sharing, 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Ah, I see

    you wrote it with 8 syllables in each line, does it have a meter? I read it aloud and it has some beat on certain parts but there are others where it loses it ( at least to me) though the flow is not affect it. I enjoyed the story, it has a haunting atmosphere. well done