Black Ribbons (senryu)

What a stunning little senryu, that says so much in (obviously) so little room as a good senryu always does!
Well done and all the best,
Ben

Judging Comment

Opening your heart and soul and letting someone love you completely is something that is very difficult to do.

Within this very short format, it is very difficult to pack a powerful message and Meme did that and much more here... its a touching poem about loving someone through the darkness and giving them hope... just beautiful!!!

Weekly Contest May 11th
Judging comment:

An elegant well written Senryu, it's that dark passion which insists to last, resonant word choice and internal rhythm. Very enjoyable.

Judging Comment

Although this poem is short due to the poetry style that it belongs to it was very nice to read a simple story plot in very few lines it's a wonderful read, held a lot of emotions and visuals. It was a great read.

- Moria Bella Bair -

The imagery in this piece is completely stunning. Amazing write, well deserved of the weekly win