Boy With The Green Thumb

by JaneDoeWrites   Jun 9, 2015


Gardener,

you eradicate
the overgrowth of weeds
smothering my soul,
planting daisies in your

wake.

*A/N: Club challenge for a 15 word poem.*

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  • 8 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    It's amazing what you can do with just a few words loved the title aswell

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Good... Keep it up sweets, I'm LOVING IT!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh this upsets me that I am just now reading this.... it should be nominated... this is a powerful poem... oh I LOVE!!!!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by JaneDoeWrites

      Thank you Andrea! Been on a nature kick recently :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Crystal, I am really happy to read a new poem from you. I LOVE this poem honestly, it has your usual metaphors but it has a deep meaning as well. It seems to be saying that this person is weeding out the poison that your heart holds and planting something beautiful within, or at least that is what I see here. The gardener you write about here seems to be someone who is really close to you and you them and the rest is history, BUT I love how you set this up as well. Gardener stands well on its own here, plus you have the message of the poem and then wake, I love the word wake here, because to me it holds a lot of meaning. I can see wake used as waking up and finding happiness. that's just my opinion though. 5/5

    :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Oh! So that is who write this! I had no idea who wrote this, but I loved it!

    Amazing job, you definitely need to make more time to write more poems!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by JaneDoeWrites

      I couldn't agree more, I've been slacking lately!