Rainy Days

by Hellon   Nov 13, 2015


Blustering March wind
turns umbrella inside out;
the rain finds me there.

@Hellon 13th November 2015

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  • 9 years ago

    by ketaki

    Short but meaningful good.

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    This has such beauty in it.

    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Lol, it does not matter, Hellon, it's a gem :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Senryu, Haiku? The linecan often be very fine anyway, from what I've read, but this is excellent.
    Well done Hellon and all the best
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi Hellon,

    I like this Haiku, although it also could be seen as a Senryu, I feel.
    Every season has it's beauty and there is nothing like a beautiful March day with fierce winds that make cauliflower clouds drift by against a deep blue sky...so much action!!

    Well done,

    Ingrid

    • 9 years ago

      by Hellon

      Thank you Michael and Ingrid for your comments. I really wasn't sure whether this was a senryu or a haiku to be honest. I was always taught that, if you place a human form or mention one, then it could not be classed as a haiku but, I also mention the month which then implies a season so...honestly...I'm not sure what it is so...I played safe and left the form out of the title haha!!!

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