Tears bloomed

by Everlasting   Mar 18, 2016


Tears were blooming like roses,
Born from the roots of pain,
stemming from eyes,
And those eyes, had irises of thorns:
brown and sharp.
And those tears, were falling on cheeks,
like petals,

with a fragrance that everyone could understand.

2015

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  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Holy crap!

    This is amazing, the visuals and emotion literally jump out of the screen!!

    Epic.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    So very pretty, beautiful descriptive of sorrow. We think our faces aren't so pretty when we are in the middle of a good cry but your poem tells us more.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A picture of a beautiful rose with a soft heart yet a sharp surface surrounds it to always bring back those who touch it to reality. I really like the descriptions and the read itself touched me...lovely write dear.

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I loved this part in particular

    Tears were blooming like roses,
    Born from the roots of pain

  • 8 years ago

    by Mayday

    I like this! It's graceful. It's easy to relate to, as the ending mentioned - beautiful metaphors, lovely work!
    And thank you for your comment! ^_^

    5/5

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