Still

Still waters and the moon, a perfect combination to talk of true love. Left me in awe. Beautiful write.

A remnant comment from the weekly contest:

"This poem might seem simplistic and too short to be given full points, but I believe that its minimalism is exactly what makes this poem outstanding. The usage of the word "still" with its double meaning was well executed. It's enough to draw the reader into the flow of this poem, which is soft and soothing. I love how this poem blossoms into such a straight-forward statement, simply triggered by seeing the moon above the sky. This poem is a perfect example of using ordinary phrases but turning it nice with tone, flow and repetition."

Judge Comments:

Everlasting grabbed my heart this week and ran with it!

Sometimes, the best poetry ever is just a few lines, the message within this poem is so powerful it needed to be small and elegant.

Still and tranquil are words that will make any reader swoon... So pretty!

Nice... Actually made me remember those I love.. For its by simple things we are reminded of them just like this poem

Nice... Actually made me remember those I love.. For its by simple things we are reminded of them just like this poem