Losing Ground

by Someone Invisible   Apr 26, 2016


I'm tired and I'm worn and just want to sleep
My loniness and sadness is running too deep.
At night I feel like I'm laying in a cold cold coffin
Where my tears make it rain way too often.
I want to close my coffins lid for good
But I'm not sure that I even could.
So instead I get up and leave to walk in the rain
So that maybe I'll drown in something other than pain.
Its dangerous for me to be alone, with no one around
When my barriers fall and my sanity's not so sound.
That's when my bad habits come to show and tell
And I fall into a horrible self torture spell.
When I close into myself and everyone walks out the door
The lid to my cloffin closes just that much more.

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April 26, 2014 (c)

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello

    As Brenda says, this is sad but well done. There's some good use of slant rhyme here too, particularly 'coffin' and 'often'

    Well done and all the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is so sad, beautifully done. I love the references to the rain and the coffin. It won't always be raining...