Experimental Lovers

by Fragile Nymph   Jun 5, 2016


Merely obsessive, I become
as I look deep into his lust.
his soul, his occupied mind.
Vanished becomes what I have left behind
...and gradually I become diagnosed with mania,
the consequence of his dreamy eyes
...and now what's funny is,
how he overlooks my deceitful nature
and how I might be overlooking his.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judge Comment:

    Fragile Nymph really and truly got me with this poem!

    That moment within the beginning of any relationship... not knowing if things could go farther, or willing to accept this explosive yearning for another.. very powerful and descriptive poem!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Andrew Elliott

    Excellent creativity. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This needs nominating!!
    So good and powerful in few lines.
    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Marvellous

    When it's high time, summary arrives. After sales bookkeeping follows.

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