This poem is on pg 159 in my book the Balance of the heart Soul & Mind visit my website at www,poetrymd.com

Truly Inspiring!

very nice! im impressed! i like your writing style .

great poem, nice flow!! :)

very good poem u have got the talent^**^ keep it up

5/5 i love the way it flows

excellent poem
5/5 i liked it u hav so much talent
can u plz vote and comment on my poem y do boys lie
peace out
xx hayz xx

Excellent....i can tell you must be very into religion ha(duh)i love your style 5/5

Now then mr great poet! This is fantastic! You are going on my favourites because i wanna read more! Thanks for all the comments because i really appreciate it! I truly do.

Loved it again. It flowed well, And you did great on making sure the rhyming didn't seem forced. A very nice poem. and thanks for your comments =) 5/5

`Taleee.

U know? i dont usually vote 5/5 for every poem i like, i should LOVE the poem, and i loved this poem a lot, actually or ur poems are great. so 5/5

A glorious write Michael, excellent penn!!!

This poem is very touching!!

I really don't know what to say, just...wow.

This is a excellent write. You are truely talented. I really enjoyed reading this. 5/5

Wow that so great keep it up love linda ~~***~**~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Your first stanza?
Is it okay for me to fall in love
With your poetry...
Eck, never mind. Already did.
This is... uh-maze-zing.
I was going to go three stanza
Over stanza on what I didn't like
But honestly, dearest?
I didn't find a single thing...
I wish I did, so I could just say
Hah hah, if he could become a poet
So could I.
But you've raised the level so high.
It's just... wonderful.
Darling, this poem inspired me.
I'll make sure that all my poems
Would be half as good as this.
Hopefully more.

This was simply amazing. It was long but its worth my time! I really enjoyed reading this one. I love the rhyming in the poem! excellent choice of words! Fantastic work! 5/5!

Another well penned poem. Great word usage and flow. 5/5

marcella

The format wasn't my favorite but everything else about the poem was great. I gave this poem a 5/5. Saw nothing wrong with anything in this poem.