Flowing Stream (a Haiku)

by Little Silver Pen   Jul 8, 2016


The stream is calmly
flowing to a crystal lake
The leaves are waving.

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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Love this. I love haikus.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Well done on this haiku.

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by ether

    A quaint haiku. i enjoyed it.

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Great little Haiku. Milly x

  • 7 years ago

    by hiraeth

    I like this poem, although I should mention that the second line has an extra syllable, typical haikus follow the 5/7/5 syllable format.

    "flowing towards a crystal lake
    flow-ing to-wards a crys-tal lake <- I counted 8

    maybe you can try "flowing to a crystal lake".

    Enjoyed this! :)

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