Bitter Sour

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Sep 28, 2016


How I wish I could treat you the same
Not the way you treated me the first time I came
What I mean is, how you treated me after I've got preggy
And even after we got married.

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How I wish I could be that bitter
And for somebody, I am the better
I hope you've realized I just imitated you
That for somebody you're so good to be true.

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Again your bitterness flashback on me
you said hurry while I carried my baby and the groceries
while you're just in the driver's seat yelling at me
Got nothing to do but followed you helplessly.

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Now I know the real you
after telling your friends things I didn't do
You told them I'm a nagger and didn't know how to cook
Hope you're happy now,telling your lies Mr. hook.

Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.

Gel@2008

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  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Gel,
    What a lovely piece. So much imagery! I feel this should be voted.. So many people are coming out with great works and I've used all my nominations! :(

    well done! you had me captured!

    • 7 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi,

      Don't worry for the nomination... it's ok with me. :)

      And Thank you also for liking this piece... this piece is a labor of pain, hurt and love...

      Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi,

      Don't worry for the nomination... it's ok with me. :)

      And Thank you also for liking this piece... this piece is a labor of pain, hurt, and love...

      Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Ah yes, this brings back memories of a past really bad marriage, I feel you girl, been there and I totally emphasize with you. I really liked this a lot, it's good to write these bad past memories out, helps with the healing. Well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Brenda,

      thank you so much Brenda... Just sharing this piece, just incase someone can relate to this..:) then I can say that "I've been there before"
      ..hahahah
      thanks again

      Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I really like the narrative in this, it's really easy to read and I really like the meter in it.

    Good Job!

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