Don't Wake Me Up...Please

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Dec 1, 2016


Every time I close my eyes I can see your figure always shown
Your caring made the ocean tide high and low

Your presence can make the moon full and new,
It's love that's all I know.

Your words can make me alive for a thousand years,
Hope you'll never let me cry another tear.

I don't know how many stars would appear
Coz you barred everything when you're here

I can't differentiate between the colours blue and pink
Because of your sweetness, that makes me wanna shrink.

You don't need to ask if I'm going to be yours
Coz I know you know the chemistry shows

I can't deny how you affect me
It's you, that I only see

Your words can create another planet,another moon
another sun, a universe or monsoon

And if this is only just a dream ,don't wake me up, please
Because I can hit someone with my fist.

Author's Note:
This is the significance of being an emphatic kind of person..You can be inlove even you are not and you can be sad even you're happy..you can be on someone's shoes.. happy reading everyone

© 2016 (Gelyn G. Rodriguez). All Rights Reserved

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  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow! this made me laugh, especially the ending :)
    Well done!

  • 7 years ago

    by Everlasting

    The line "and if this is just a dream, don't wake me up please"

    Reminded me of a poem I wrote a long time ago. Ah! Thank you.

    As far as the ending, it made me chuckle. I think it shows part of your personality. It adds a bit of humor.

    I for one don't enjoy being woken up when I'm in a middle of a dream. I haven't gotten to the point of hitting anyone, but my eyes may prompt that I want to do that lol

    • 7 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Luce,

      mi amiga. ... gracias for that funny and sweet comment..you made me laugh also. ..lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Hi Gel, I did enjoy this write and love the lines Ben stated they stuck out..
    I must admit the ending threw me off abit though all in all good write.

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Gel, such a lovely write. Your visuals were just dreamy. Well done-

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Your words can create another planet,another moon
    another sun, a universe or monsoon

    ^^

    Lovely couple of lines, Gel and a lovely write overall.

    Well done,

    Ben

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