LOVE

Very cute.

Well, you have amazingly defined the glory of love. But still many people on this earth don't understand the reality of love, and thus causes many crimes.

So, it's a great message for the whole mankind.

Well done. Deserves 5/5.

Ladies, ladies, ladies... This is a fantastic collab about the ups and downs of love yet honest and also funny in parts which love can also be when it is given and received properly. It also has perfect rhyming throughout which makes it all the more enjoyable to read for me anyway.

1/ Yes, love is a beautiful word but some people unfortunately use is falsely and freely alot of the time which can hurt us like hell. I imagine the birds tweeting as much as the word love is used and my goodness it's alot, right? Some people have alot of love to give and others just couldn't give a tosh.

2/ Love can be many things and I believe the first two lines in this to be true because being loved can heal many of us and if we do not get love others hurt and so unthinkable things because they haven't got the love they need to want. I've never really received a 'true' love so to me it would bring a new life and make me happier but right now it just causes me heartache and pain. I must say I wasn't expecting the bus line but it did bring a smile to my face.

3/ Love can make us go crazy ans most definitely do naughty things that we wouldn't do otherwise but I guess thats life..

4/ Yes it is one of the most powerful yet overused words in any dictionary and people would do anything for love, I guess.

You wrote so flawlessly about love so it's a 10 from Em :)

*coughs and raises one interested eyebrow*

A collaboration from two of the finest ladies on this site.

Love has the ability to lift a person, make them feel like they are flying, dangling from helium filled heart shaped balloon. Love also, has the ability to be a jealous looking chap/ess and shoot a green pellet through the heart of said balloon and make the love struck fool fall to the ground with a thump!

Well done, a clever write from two minds. Me, well, I am always in two minds. No you're not!

My favourite part:

...or, love can throw you under a bus
^
this did make me laugh - sorry!

Take care,

Michael xx

Ladies,

This is a very good little rhyming poem that I enjoyed thoroughly! Love certainly can do an awful lot of things to us...and not all of it very good, I'm afraid.

Well done. Nice to see a collaboration from members of...well, The Collaborators!

All the best,

Ben

Well done ladies! Such a lovely write about the ups and downs of love. So very true-