Confessions of a Broken Ship

I quite enjoyed the imagery in this piece; it reminded me of the painting, The Raft of Medusa, there's a sense of pandemonium that's both innately depicted in your poem, and in the painting. Aside from that, like Mr. Darcy mentioned it could use some minor tweaks to help with the flow, but still nevertheless, a gripping write.

Kasie, well done. Good rhyming and you have really opened up and shared deep feelings-thank you-hugs-

Kasie,

I like the rhyming of this piece. ... you portrayed a sad tale here...I like the imaginary comparing yourself into a ship. ..

I'm like a broken ship,
That's slowly sinking down.
Deep into the darkest depth,
Trying not to drown,
^^^^
I can relate to this. ...We still strive even how hard the situation is....

Well done 5/5

Gel

Kasie, I do love this! Its the right amount of sad, if that makes sense!
Great rhyming and imagery all the way through!

Well done!

As I read this I'm very nearly hearing a perfect beat. I could offer suggestions, little tweaks, but I am sure you can manage this yourself. :)