Rythm of The Silent River

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Jan 17, 2017


~*1*~
As I stepped into the silvery water,
And watched the moon reflects closer,

~*2*~
I can feel my heart singing the love,
It's the magic from above.

~*3*~
I played it with my hand to blur the picture,
Wishing it's you that I capture.

~*4*~
But again it's only me, alone,
Singing with my heart the silent song.

~~*5*~~
Can you come with me now as I amble the way into the river?
I just want to walk with you with my head on your shoulder.

~~*6*~~
I don’t wanna be alone
While the river played the song

~*7*~
I will look at you as if, it would be my last,
No one will distract me even a splash.

~*8*~
You can hear my heart singing the love
It's the magic from above

~*9*~
That nobody but only us can hear,
The rhythm of the silent river.

~~0*GEL*0~~

© 2017 (Gelyn G. Rodriguez). All Rights Reserved

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  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Hey Gel,

    It was the title of this piece that drew me to it and I have to say that I'm glad I read this....I don't want to sound like a patronising ass but your poetry has really improved massively, I really like the format of this, you word choice is excellent and rally memorable, as Ben.P stated, the half rhymes were really well thought out and keep the tempo of the poem flowing nicely!!

    Great job!

    Other Ben :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Gel,

    This is a lovely, soothing poem to read and the delicacy is added to by some clever half rhymes which keep the piece flowing nicely and prevents it sounding forced.
    Again, beautifully laid out, too.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Ok, yes I do remember ah.. Make sure that you take good landing if you are flying. lol... All the best..

  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    First two lines -

    The whole world knows that Sun is the main source of light. And I think it's great honour that you are giving great respect to your love.

    Hey, Wait a minute...hmm.... I mean this is brilliant. Your every new love poems coming top of each other. I see a great power and respect of love. It's just like romantic tale. I don't have much words to describe the glory of this grand poem. Hope you will handle after this.

    Great poem. I like every single lines of this write. Keep on flying.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Yah I'm flying right now. ...remember I'm wonder woman. ...and my man is supernumb oh I mean superman. .lol seriously thanks for the beautiful comment

  • 8 years ago

    by ketaki

    Good nice thought

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