Intersections

by Saakiel   Jan 30, 2017


Crossing intersections
on bricks in patterns and
bleachers in intervals
of void spaces, I sat,
plugged, and started
whispering words
only I can envisage.

Crossing intersections
of cynical perspectives
of people who’ve been
turning heads from
battles they could have won,
only to realize I, too, am
avoiding it at all cost.

Crossing intersections
on uncertain alley
of mist and mud,
only to find out
that I am on a curve
where my trails are
sculpted for years.

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  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I love when a piece is so vague but is totally understood! Another great piece here.

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Your word choice in this piece is captivating and the style is extremely unique. And I absolutely fell in love with the voice you've displayed.

    Happy writing, and if you ever want to request comments on your pieces, feel free to message me!

    • 8 years ago

      by Saakiel

      Thank you. I'm happy this piece come across that way to you.

      xxx

  • 8 years ago

    by Phil

    This is fantastic. We all have our paths to walk along, I think the key is do the best we can without judging anyone else unless we have the guts to walk even a second in their shoes.

    • 8 years ago

      by Saakiel

      Hi Phil,
      Thanks for leaving your perspective about this piece. It means a lot. Yes definitely we have out own paths to travel. However as it may seem about pursuing our own journey, this piece isn't about it. But still I appreciate you making sense out of my work. Kudos.

      xxx

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A warm welcome to the site.

    If you keep writing such marvellously vague and descriptive poetry like this, you will soon establish yourself one of the site's best. A very good write.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Saakiel

      Thanks Ben. I like 'vague' as an identifier of my poems. :)

      xxx

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