by The Po whet   Jun 9, 2017

Today I was dusting through
the attic of my heart.
...I stumbled upon a lost memory...
....It all flooded back again...

...It was the memory of YOU.

the one that made my MARS heart
realize it could sprout love.

the one who made me
write out my heart in tongues..
"Mon amoure" I'd say

...But you'd always say back
with your
Titillating smile


By: The Po whet


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  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Blast those dastardly women, Moe. They do seem to say that word with an unnerving regularity, don't they?

    Great write. All the very best,


    • 3 years ago

      by The Po whet

      Hello Ben,...yeah sometimes girls give us trouble when chasing... The chase is always sweet when she's worth it though.Thanks for the comment.

  • 3 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hi. Nice to meet you. Em said most of what I wanted to say. The whole poem has this aura of love mixed with goodbye. Bittersweet. Great write.

    • 3 years ago

      by The Po whet

      Hello and a pleasure to meet you too.Thanks for the comment.I appreciate it

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    Well hello stranger, hope you're ok.

    1/ Well opening up your heart like this from a memory unleashed can some times be good other times well mainly bad because in my opinion it opens a whole can of nasties. I love the word usage here.

    2/ I like the empathsis on you and mars here because to me the you is a distant memory and mars is linked there by being distant too.. my interpretation anyway but yes we can all grow love when we want to.

    3/ I love the imagery here of your heart writing our Mon amoures (love that too)

    4/ love the way their smiles seen as sexually arousing, maybe I read more into that than I should have.

    Oooosh that ending? (I have to say I googled this) and its French do goodbye, yes I know I'm terrible at languages lol.

    Nice to see you back,

    • 3 years ago

      by The Po whet

      Em,it hurts that you're calling me a stranger (lol).Thanks for the comment.I'll will myself not to disappear again.

    • 3 years ago

      by Em

      I just haven't seen you around recently but hey we have life's too live, just hoping things are going good for you :) take care

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