peak

by gopi nath   Jun 20, 2017


you lay your head on my chest,
to feel my heart beat,
you want to stand on me,
to feel the pain of my feet

i want to see your reflection,
but i wish, i could be your mirror to see you,
my sound of love is def to you,
i wish i could be your,'s ears to feel the sound

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Sweet piece here :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Interestingly written. I enjoyed this.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Hi gopi :)
    I feel this piece is so heartfelt. I sense you write with such emotion and a deepness, and I also sense a language barrier, which adds to your writing. There is much substance within your piece's.

    Keep it coming and well done

    Michael :)

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hi Gopi! I agree with Michael. It's amazing to me how your message is always felt, your emotions are so transparent despite some little language barrier. Good job, Gopi!

    • 8 years ago

      by gopi nath

      thank you for support Michel:0)

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