alive

by gopi nath   Jun 23, 2017


my mind rebels over a soft touch of your skin,
but people say that i have committed a sin

things aren't same before,
i was humble to know the truth
i taught she was here to say i am there for you,

but,she turned her back and said i am leaving you,
cries and tears never kept me alive,
but,my love inside you drove me and feel i am alive again.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    A heart-felt piece gopi and an emotional piece. Difficult when we experience loss of any kind

    Best wishes my friend

    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As Mel says, a sad piece but with a touch of hope at the end there.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Aww, Gopi, this is sad but so sweet! Well done.

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