by deeplydesturbed Jun 30, 2017
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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by Lucifer
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It's good to know in the end of the poem you quitted drinking. |
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If only i had stayed sober ! Seems old habits die hard !! |
by Brenda
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Nams, I like your layout of this a lot. It tells a chilling story too, how much this has cost you. Strong, stay strong. |
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Thank you Brenda :) |
by Phil
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such emotion and rawness within this that I was gripped. I do think it'd be much more affective if it was centred but that is just my opinion and usually I am wrong lol |
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Thank you phil. I actually tried to edit it so the drunk and drunken were all over the place but it straightened them.. |
by Ren
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Wow! This is so raw and beautifully written! Well done, hon, and so much love and peace to you, as always! <3 |
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Thanks Ren :) |
by Em
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All I can say is I truly wish I had a vote left because this is beautifully raw. |
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Thank you Em. Xx |